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上海高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文范文
【作文題目】
描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐，具體要求如下：
詳細(xì)描述用餐的情況
簡(jiǎn)要表述你對(duì)這次午餐的感受
這是一篇簡(jiǎn)單卻需要挖掘的文章，因?yàn)槿绻皇敲枋鲇貌颓闆r，顯然缺乏深度，夸夸其談，流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費(fèi)、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中，筆者另辟蹊徑，通過(guò)大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時(shí)的匆忙來(lái)襯托“我”的悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土，通過(guò)飲食來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)情緒，更好地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)，表現(xiàn)出樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單，文筆清新，語(yǔ)言精準(zhǔn)，并運(yùn)用了高中階段常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，不失為一個(gè)很好的作文模板，供學(xué)生借鑒。
【作文范文】
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of the classroompoured all students but one。Unlike my peers, I was in no hurry to make a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waiting for my turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, the wide range of food preparedby the school was superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like to do over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.
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